The moon ascended the stairs towards the vastness of the skies. Reaching there with all its glory. Looking down upon the earth in a soothing way. Enveloping the place with the silvery glow. How lovely are the portals of the night,When stars come out to watch the daylight die. The whole environment is hushed…as if speaking would break the pure fragile glass of silence. Peace prevails everywhere and the sanctity dominates the troubled minds. Sometimes the vulnerability of the night was broken by a soft hooting of an owl or a distant cry of some stray dog.
All this spreads the aura of a desire, a desire to retreat to a fantasized refuge. Where none other can reach but you.
It’s a valley where darkness prevails yet hopes flourish. Where souls depart yet happiness linger. That valley where things happen but are out of one’s reach…only to be felt.
Where there are no boundaries, no customs, no limitations and no restrictions. In that place you fly when you wish to, you swim deep when you desire to and you climb high when u intend to.
In that valley it is spring when you are happy. Flowers bloom everywhere, butterflies flutter and the shinning sun warms your spirit.
But its winter and autumn…cold and frozen in that valley when you are sad. Leaves flutter down from the trees, leaving their support…to be blown by the harsh winds towards destination unknown and to be cracked under alien feet.
The mist covering you…turns you cold. Your emotions get frozen. That is when your heart is not open.
It all happens in that valley. Its all about happiness, sorrow, springs, autumns, winters and emotions…..it is all about dreams...
6 comments:
u played with the expressions so much beautifully that i was almost imagining it!
I would rate it ZABARDAST!
Ahh...thanks alot sir :)
That means i have achieved sumthing if i can make my reader Imagine!!
*Whoa*
WOW Sundus...!!!
such perfectness in putting up the dreamland seasons in words...which indeed is difficult!! As said by Asad, me too got lost momentarily to get the feel of those seasons in that valley!! :)
What matters is making reader imagine nearly same what writer thot while writing....and u have achieved it, if i am not wrong!!! :) :)
Keep it up dear!! :)
touched i am, sandhu, really, and yet i must say this, try to make your refuge here, in this world, i have done it, and it is not impossible, ecstasy such is not overrated.
it was a pleasurable read, and yeah, just to point one thing out, write "retreat" instead of "retrieve"
rest is all good :)
Thank you so much ahmad bhai!
Yes...u are not wrong...making this land ur refuge sure helps.
it works as a barrier frm the cruelity of world.
:)
Ohk....mistake noted and will be done!
*winks*
what a cool blog ..i really loved your headindg about thougths......
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