Saturday, May 23, 2009

The Haven


She sits there, forlorn and tired. Her chin rests on her knees as she hugs herself to block the chill off. The moon throws its eerie, silvery glow over the world below. A distant hoot of a barn owl or a howl from some stray dog breaks the icy silence. She gazes somewhere far, not knowing herself the destination unknown.
She thinks about him and an affectionate sigh escapes her lips as she shifts her position. There he stands…that captivating smile playing on his handsome face, reaching his eyes and making them dance.
He moves towards her with gait like a feather floating in air and reaches her softly.
“What’s bothering you today?” he whispers as he floats down beside her. She looks away, her hair making a veil of black silk over her face.
“The dream…” not looking at him, she says in a small voice.
He laces her fingers with hers and softly presses her hand. Surprised he is at the coldness of the small hand in his. He rubs it, glowing warmth spreads through her. That even melted the ice of her eyes causing the water to trace her cheeks.
“The dream again.” Says he.
“He never comments on the dream, never unfolds its mystery to me? Why it haunts me so?! Why am I so alone in it when he is always within thoughts reach…?”
She thinks as her eyes searches the answers on his radiant face. His lips brushes against the back of her hand, his touch like a cool breeze flowing through the leaves, making them dance ever so lightly.
She smiles then; his presence always has such effect on her. He notices the calmness spread over her so steers her towards her room. The graceful fingers tuck her in and he sits there, holding her hand until she lulls to sleep, looking in those dreamy eyes.
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She stands there all alone, scared and panting as is she has run miles and miles. A heart-stopping growl makes her realize that she is being surrounded by wolves…blood-thirsty, cold-blooded and lusty wolves, who looks at her with drooling mouths. She backs away, tries to save herself but stumbles and falls down. Closing around her are wolves and stranded she is alone…
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She wakes up all sweaty and out of breath. Her heart thumping wildly as if was trying to break the cage of ribs. She looks around but couldn’t find him.
“Why this dream haunts me so much?!” sobs she.
“Why are these wolves always clambering around me? Looking at me so lustfully… why am I so alone in it? Why isn’t there somebody to help me out? Is it how the send would be like? Would I be taken by the wolves…tear me apart, would they?”
“So many questions, Lord! So many! For answers I search, I crave…” she sobs in her hands.
His touch spreads ripples through her, just as a stone thrown in still water, those ripples which spread further and further until disappearing. He says nothing, just holds her tight. Her answers still blowing in the wind, the questions echoing in her ears…she buries her face in his chest and feels safe there, in the protection of his arms.
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This world is clustering and overflowing with wolves un-leashed. All lusty and barbaric. Woman’s respect has shrunk to merely desires and lust. This is the dream that irks her so much, she being all alone in this world with “wolves” around her.
She takes refuge in her imagination where she is loves, truly and respectfully. Where he holds her tightly when she is scared, suffocated and torn. Listens to her passionately and calmly when she is all down…where she is not looked at with lustful eyes, drooling mouths.
These imaginations, visions and illusions sometimes form shape, reality. And this reality keeps the world struggling on, gives many a people a reason to live, breath, smile and to look forward to a new day, to the crisp sun to glimpse over the horizon and…to feel the warmth.

6 comments:

Afshan Shaik said...

first of all i gotta say HATS OFF TO UR command on english language
and the sentences u beautifully frame!!
the girl
wolves
THE IMagination intensity of urs
just too good!!
but most interesting thing is how did u customise ur blog the look and feel of it !! pls tell me
i wanna change mine too the template colors back grnd evry thing:(

Mohit said...

DO i need to say nything more sundus!!?? :)

I can say more or less same to ur imagination [or inspiration?? ;)]
And who was telling me tht is not good....lemme beat tht person!! :D
*searchin-all-over*

Sundus! U have written every single word with perfection...i m not getting what made u think what u have been thinking abt it?? Sach me, I dont find any flaw...infact,as afshan mentioned, the way u framed sentences and the words used, are just too good...perfect with the situation!!

Last para, I really liked it...in a way tht its so truely expressed! But still with a hope of ray reflected to make a way out.....

Loved It All Sundus!!

3 Cheers to ur writing!! :) :) :)

Sundus said...

Thanks for going through it and for you comment Afshan g :)
I'll sure let u know how i customised m'blog and urs wud look aik dam zabardast soon!
*winks*

@Mohit:
Yeah! WHo was telling you that its not good!!
*searching-alongwith-you* =D =D
Thank you so much for reading it :) :)
Next time se i wont hesistate to put m'hogwash on the blog!
*tongue-out*

Zahra said...

Its beautiful and very expressive in its own way!
I loved the portion when you expressed girl's feeling abt her fears!
God bless you :)

Unknown said...

Sue pata hai mera mood thora khrab tha tou i was like, "ara mein neh is ka article abi parha tou i mite not be able to do justice".. but BUT ... w.o.w.. just wow. I mean damn! DAMN yaaaar. i dnt have words, seriously! u have no i dea(or maybe u do) how immense beauty it carried. very genuine and meaningful! loved the way u transferred the meaing in a real symbolic way. tho i felt that the last para should have been equally ambigious, it would have added a lot of professional touch to this already s0 perfect piece. i loved its feel, i cd almost sense the icy cold environment.
"melted ice in her eyes which traced down her cheeks"..did i copy it from sumwhere(no offences:P) it was heavenly! am just so proud. mean that! keep it up. keep rokin..thumbs!! loved it..
WOW!!
Hira

Ahmed Belal Hashmi said...

Been a long, long time since I ventured out of my room and into the wild, albeit metaphorically, but still, this was like a breath of fresh air. Somehow, coincidentally, I was thinking along the sae lines right now, been doing that for a while.
So, back to the point, Sandhu Ji, I'd still say the language could be improved, just a bit; there were a few typos and some grammar slaughter here and there, but who cares :D
Beautiful, imaginative, and kudos to your finesse. Liked it, loved it, drowned in it. God bless you and your writing skills.